'The Dog-Tag' (imagined narrative) written by Andrew Drury

This story was written in 2007

The spring sun shone sparingly through the net curtain. The old woman had briefly closed her eyes against the rays that had permeated through the uncharacteristically dirty windows. The downpour that had been ejected from the clouds in the previous evening had left a film of dirt that had come down with the drops of rain.

With a slight shaking of the head, she pulled herself back into the real world and sat upright in the red high-backed chair. Almost in one movement, she bent over to ties up the laces on the sensible brown walking shoes after widening the distance over the tongue so that her wide feet could be encased in the premium leather uppers. When she was satisfied that they had been fastened sufficiently, she raised herself from the chair, with the stiffness of a spring that has not been used for some time. The arthritis was an indicator of climatic change, a barometer of the unsettled weather that she was observing.

She walked more steadily towards the door and picked up a discarded coat. This she placed gingerly over her shoulders and buttoned up, concealing her tweeds mid-length skirt and the knitted brown cardigan.

The front door was opened and she noted that, once again, the postman had not brought her any mail. When you reach my age, she surmised, not even the credit companies with their discounted loans are interested in you and the firms that specialise in the older age group think that you have either died or used up all your life savings.

She shivered, as there was a noticeable contrast between the coldness that is felt in the early days of the year and the warmth that is experienced behind the shield of the windowpanes. She checked her coat pockets to make sure that she had her house keys before pulling the door firmly shut. As she did so, she looked around the house. There were very few alterations that had been made since she had inherited the cottage from her parents all those years ago, even the same tone of dark green paint had been applied to the woodwork. From the top of the chimneystack to the perennials in the garden, the place was almost like a living museum, a testament to a time that was not all that long ago in her mind. There was no doubt that the next inhabitants of the house would make ‘improvements,’ a misnomer by and large used by people who were embarrassed that other people had also lived there.

She made her way, firmly and steadily, down the garden path, observing the new life that was making itself known. The vibrant winter aconites, the cheerful snowdrops and the regal crocuses were some of the messengers of the good news that winter was not the end. There were green shoots of asters beginning to show shyly and the red youthful leaves of roses that were signs of resurrection after the hibernation during the harshness of winter.

The wrought iron gate had been carefully maintained and opened smoothly as it had been oiled faithfully. The constant repainting had denied the corrosive power of rust any leeway. The path leading up to it had been rigorously looked after – moss had been treated and the autumnal leaves had been swept away to be resurrected as useful leaf mould to be spread around the property.

The woman looked both ways before she crossed the road for she knew that her faculties were not as acute as they had been in her formative years. When she was satisfied that there was no danger from any vehicle that was driven by wheels, she made her way to the other pavement and on into the nearby field.

The ground was hard, as the harsh effects of the frost had  not ceded to the gentle spring rain that was forecast on the morning radio programme. There was sparkling in the grass, like diamonds waiting to be plucked from the surface of the earth. She half-remembered from her Sunday School days that her teacher had read to them that their days on this planet would be transitory, supported in her evidence by a Bible verse that their lives would be brief like dew on the grass. She shivered at the recollection, the morbid thought cutting across the enjoyment of a newly created day.

She looked across the valley, with trees re-clothed in their brilliant verdant garments. Memories came back to her of those times, not so long ago in her mind, when she observed the men in the air in combat against the enemy. She could still sense the anticipation of the chase when she cheered her champions into battle. There was the rattle that scarcely be heard at ground level when the fighters shot their piercing missiles at each other. There was the sickening feeling as the British plane dived mortally wounded towards the trees with a black tail of smoke following like some ugly Chinese kite. However, there was also the cruel sense of justice being done if the stricken plane happened to have been flown by the enemy, for there was the morbid fascination with the collection of souvenirs from the fallen foe as the civilians felt justified in collecting trophies of war.

It was from this field that she had seen the course of history being changed forever. It was also from this place that her world had been changed forever. It was here that Bert, the butcher’s son, had bravely held her hand and sworn that he would love her for all of eternity and beyond. She had laughed at his romantic, idealistic view of life but he had clearly meant all of the words that came out of his mouth.

She remembered the last time that they spent together. He was in his dark green uniform, ready to take on the people that had prevented them being together as they should have been. They wanted to get married but the vicar stated that all the wedding slots had already been taken and, in any case, her mother had refused to give them permission as her daughter was under age to be betrothed without her consent. There had been a large sense of unfairness at the time, but perhaps it had been the best decision.

Bert and the young lady, as she was at the time, had stopped at this very stile on their last walk together, and he had given her a lingering kiss, the taste of it was still evident in her senses. As the wind now gently brushed through her short grey hair, he ran his fingers through her long auburn tassels and down her face like a man going blind who wants to retain all the remembrances before his vision is taken away from him.

There was his cheeky grin as he revealed two teeth missing, the result of a courageous challenge on the football field. His short black hair crowning the earnest  face of a man who was determined in all that he did. He would make a wonderful husband when he came back from the war. It was a vision that had not been realised, a dream that had become a nightmare as her hopes were shattered.

There was a wet sensation on her hand as she was aware that she was wearing a somewhat idiotic grin as she remembered. She looked down to see the face of a Golden Labrador, looking up in anticipation of a possible playmate. There was going to be no way that the woman’s arthritic condition would allow her to play vigorously with this creature who had recently been a puppy. The shiny yellow coat was sprinkled with the wetness of the rain that had descended that morning. The bright legs of the dog were bouncing with rapid leaps with the eager anticipation that its new friend would join the games that it wanted to play. The tongue of the Labrador hung outside of the mouth as the dog panted in anticipation of future exercise. Its eyes were sparkling like a pair of black diamonds with the brightness of youth, not dimmed by the cares and burdens of old age. There was a desire on the part of the dog to enjoy life and was grateful for having, seemingly, to have found a new companion to share time with.

The woman looked down and smile with a slight upturn at the corners of her mouth. It was good that she was distracted from remembering the ghosts of the past and dwelling on the possibilities that had no chance of occurring.

She bent down to take hold of the collar of the young dog, where she had noticed something glistening from the sunlight.

She read carefully as she had left her reading spectacles in the cottage, for she had not expected to come across such miniscule words whilst she was out walking. The words on the dog tag, which were recently engraved, proudly announced that animal still leaping to play belonged to the new owners of the cottage recently purchased in the village.

The elderly woman grasped carefully and gently the blue collar of the young dog before the two of them followed the footpath that lead to the gate at the entrance to the field. The dog was still bounding, believing that this action was part of the game. The road was crossed with carefulness as she now had the responsibility of getting this dog home, as well as herself.

At the front door of the newly purchased home were a young couple, wearing stonewashed denims. They looked ready for action on their acquisition – putting in modern electric wiring, decorating, sorting out the slightly overgrown garden – and yet there was an air of bewilderment. The look of puzzlement was resolved when they saw the young dog being brought back to where it belonged by the kind actions of the old lady who lived just down the road.

They were relieved and stated that they did not know how to thank her. This comment brought great relief to the old lady since, in her mind, she did not know she would have felt receiving any gift of gratitude.

It was enough for her to know that the dog was returned to the place where it belonged, with the assistance of the engraved piece of metal.

As she meandered slowly up their garden path, having placed the dog back in their safekeeping, she noticed plants that were beginning to rouse to life after their long winter slumber. There had been vegetation that had been removed when the couple moved in, but the front garden had remained largely untouched either because they were too busy with other renovations or because they did not want to remove its permanence too hastily.

The woman reached their garden gate, opened it unsteadily and turned around to wave a final farewell, which was accompanied by a shy but friendly smile. The couple one hand each, but both were more interested in the return of their pet than in the one who had retrieved it from its wanderings.

Above her head, the sky had turned battleship grey. The clouds, that had earlier appeared white and woolly, were now threatening to soak her to the sin.

In a pace that she had not used for many months, she moved hastily back down the road to her house. The gate was opened and closed by her bony hands, the key fumbled for, and the front door was unlocked with great relief that she had not felt the effects of any inclement weather.

She removed her coat and made her way to an old bureau in the living room. The top drawer was pulled out and she removed a yellowed envelope from it, which held her bitterest memories, remembrances of the day that her hopes had disappeared.

The enveloped was tipped so that its contents were exposed to the air. She recalled the awful morning when Bert’s mother walked up the path to her parents’ house with the expression of horror written all over her face. She had been informed by telegraph that her darling boy had been killed whilst in action against the enemy. Her hair had summarily turned white with the shock because her body could not cope with the news that the child that she had given birth to had been returned to te earth so soon. The telegram she had placed in the hands of Bert’s beloved for her to keep. The crumpled piece of paper (now turning brown with the passing of the years) declared how  the soul of her young man had been removed from this world with his hopes unfulfilled and their dreams shattered.

Whilst recalling the dreadful events that were so long ago and were forever recent in her mind, the woman felt salty dribbles falling from her eyes and making a channel down her cheeks, tasting bitter when they reached her lips.

Also in the envelope was a small piece of metal on a chain, which was that they found of him after the explosion. It was embossed with the briefest details of a man who had loved life and had loved her. The tag was no longer glistening with the sun, but was tarnished with time. The woman cradled it close to her chest. He might not have a place on and in the earth to have called his home, but there would always be room in her heart for him.

As the tears rolled down her cheeks from behind her spectacles with the pain of the memories and the agony of a life together being snatched away, the rain lashed hard onto the windows with great ferocity.


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